Section 9.3.10, 27th line on page 310
Current description:
Such hyperlinks are represented by the element, where. the
element's content is the frame that should be the source of the link.
Proposal:
The period after "where" should be removed from the current sentence as
follows:
Such hyperlinks are represented by the element, where the
element's content is the frame that should be the source of the link.
Section 9.3.10, 32nd line on page 311
Current description:
If the value of the this attribute is _blank, the xlink:show attribute
value is new.
Proposal:
The second "the" should be removed from the current sentence as follows:
If the value of this attribute is _blank, the xlink:show attribute value
is new.
Section 9.3.10, 33rd line on page 311
Current description:
If the value of the this attribute is any of the other value options, the
value of the xlink:show attribute is replace.
Proposal:
The second "the" should be removed from the current sentence as follows:
If the value of this attribute is any of the other value options, the
value of the xlink:show attribute is replace.
Section 9.3.11, 15th line on page 315
Current description:
Link, including a IRI and link target frame.
Proposal:
"a" should be "an" as follows:
Link, including an IRI and link target frame.
Section 9.4.1, 38th line on page 319
Current description:
rotatez ( ), which specifies a rotation by
degrees along the y-axis.
Proposal:
"y-axis" should be "z-axis" as follows:
rotatez ( ), which specifies a rotation by
degrees along the z-axis.
Section 9.4.6, 24th line on page 323
Current description:
This geometry may be visualized in office application user interfaces, for
instance by displaying interaction handles, that provide a simple way to
modify the the geometry.
Proposal:
The last "the" should be removed from the current sentence as follows:
This geometry may be visualized in office application user interfaces, for
instance by displaying interaction handles, that provide a simple way to
modify the geometry.
Section 9.5.3, 36th line on page 334
Current description:
Parameters: (x1 y1 x2 y2 x3 y3 x y)+
Description: (x1, y1) and (x2, y2) is defining the bounding box of a
ellipse. A line is then drawn from the current point to the start angle of
the arc that is specified by the radial vector of point (x3, y3) and then
counter clockwise to the end-angle that is specified by point (x4, y4).
Proposal:
Change x4 and y4 in the description to x and y, respectively, as follows:
(x1, y1) and (x2, y2) is defining the bounding box of a ellipse. A line is
then drawn from the current point to the start angle of the arc that is
specified by the radial vector of point (x3, y3) and then counter
clockwise to the end-angle that is specified by point (x, y).
Section 9.5.3, 37th line on page 334
Current description:
The same as the "A" command, except that a implied moveto to the starting
point is done.
Proposal:
"a" should be "an" as follows:
The same as the "A" command, except that an implied moveto to the starting
point is done.
Section 9.5.3, 40st line on page 334
Current description:
The same as the "A" command, except that a implied moveto to the starting
point is done and the arc is drawn clockwise.
Proposal:
"a" should be "an" as follows:
The same as the "A" command, except that an implied moveto to the starting
point is done and the arc is drawn clockwise.
Section 9.5.3, 3rd line on page 336
Current description:
If "$" is preceding a integer value, the value is a indexing a
draw:modifiers attribute.
Proposal:
The first "a" should be "an" and the second "a" should be removed as
follows:
If "$" is preceding an integer value, the value is indexing a
draw:modifiers attribute.
Section 9.5.3, 5th line on page 336
Current desciption:
A example of the draw:text-areas attribute that defines two text areas,
including modifier and equation usage, would be:
Proposal:
"A" should be "An" as follows:
An example of the draw:text-areas attribute that defines two text areas,
including modifier and equation usage, would be:
Section 9.5.3, 23rd line on page 336
Current description:
If "$" is preceding a integer value, the value is a indexing a
draw:modifiers attribute.
Proposal:
"a" should be "an" and the second "a" should be removed as follows:
If "$" is preceding an integer value, the value is indexing a
draw:modifiers attribute.
Section 9.5.3, 25th line on page 336
Current description:
A example of the draw:glue-points attribute that defines two glue points,
including modifier and equation usage, would be:
Proposal:
"A" should be "An" as follows:
An example of the draw:glue-points attribute that defines two glue points,
including modifier and equation usage, would be:
Section 9.5.3, 40st line on page 336
Current description:
the middle of each side of the shape bound rectangle specifies a object
specific glue point
Proposal:
"a" should be "an" as follows:
the middle of each side of the shape bound rectangle specifies an object
specific glue point
Section 9.5.3, 12th line on page 337
Current description:
The position in the list is the same as the to be referenced glue-point of
the draw:glue-points attribute.
Proposal:
"to be" should be removed as follows:
The position in the list is the same as the referenced glue-point of the
draw:glue-points attribute.
Section 9.5.5, 42nd line on page 338
Current description:
Due to the fact that modifier values may changed by interaction it is a
convenient way to integrate dynamic values into the shape geometry.
Proposal:
"be" should be inserted between "may" and "changed" as follows:
Due to the fact that modifier values may be changed by interaction it is a
convenient way to integrate dynamic values into the shape geometry.
Section 9.5.5, 18th line on page 339
Current description:
A formula can make use of other formulas or modifier values by function
and or modifier reference.
Proposal:
"and or" should be "or" as follows:
A formula can make use of other formulas or modifier values by function or
modifier reference.
Section 9.5.5, 1st line on page 340
Current description:
identifier
Proposal:
"identifier" should be capitalized to "Identifer" in the same way as
"Description."
Section 9.5.5, 3rd line on page 340
Current description:
The top position the svg:viewBox attribute has to be used.
Proposal:
"of" should be inserted after "position" as follows:
The top position of the svg:viewBox attribute has to be used.
Section 9.5.5, 4th line on page 340
Current description:
The right position the svg:viewBoxattribute has to be used.
Proposal:
"of" should be inserted after "position" as follows:
The right position of the svg:viewBoxattribute has to be used.
Section 9.5.5, 5th line on page 340
Current description:
The bottom position the svg:viewBox attribute has to be used.
Proposal:
"of" should be inserted after "position" as follows:
The bottom position of the svg:viewBox attribute has to be used.
Section 9.5.5, 14th line on page 340
Current description:
A example for the draw:formula attribute would be:
Proposal:
"A" should be "An" as follows:
An example for the draw:formula attribute would be:
Section 9.5.6, 34th line on page 341
Current description:
If "$" is preceding a integer value, the value is a indexing a
draw:modifiers attribute.
Proposal:
The first "a" should be "an" and the second "a" should be removed as
follows:
If "$" is preceding an integer value, the value is indexing a
draw:modifiers attribute.
Section 9.7.2, 6th line on page 349
Current description:
the shape is faded in our out by drawing or removing line by line, either
horizontally or vertically, in a random fashion.
Proposal:
"our" should be "or" as follows:
the shape is faded in or out by drawing or removing line by line, either
horizontally or vertically, in a random fashion.
Section 9.8.1, 9th line on page 354
Current description:
An effect is a combination of one or more animation elements that animate
a single shape and or a shape's paragraphs.
Proposal:
"and or" should be "or" as follow:
An effect is a combination of one or more animation elements that animate
a single shape or a shape's paragraphs.
Section 9.8.2, 16th line on page 357
Current description:
For presentation documents, The anim:command attribute of the
element (see section 13.6.1) can have the following values:
Proposal:
"The" should be "the" as follows:
For presentation documents, the anim:command attribute of the
element (see section 13.6.1) can have the following values:
Section 9.9, 35th line on page 360
Current description:
execute: another application is lunched when this event is triggered.
Proposal:
"lunched" should be changed to "launched" as follows:
execute: another application is launched when this event is triggered.
Section 9.10, 3rd line on page 363
Current description:
This section describes text fields that are specific to the text of
drawing shapes that are contained presentations.
Proposal:
"in" should be inserted before "presentations" as follows:
This section describes text fields that are specific to the text of
drawing shapes that are contained in presentations.
Section 9.11.4, 19th line on page 365
Current description:
The presentation:source attribute specifies whether the current date/time
or the fixed content of the the field declaration is displayed.
Proposal:
The duplicated "the" should be removed as follows:
The presentation:source attribute specifies whether the current date/time
or the fixed content of the field declaration is displayed.
In 15.4.1, subsection 8.8.4 of XSL is referenced, but it
should be 7.8.4.
In 15.5.29, subsection 7.9.14 of XSL is referenced, but
it should be 7.19.4.
In 15.11.11, subsection 7.5.13 of XSL is referenced, but
it should be 7.15.13.
In 15.4.19, subsection 8.8.4 of XSL is referenced, but it
should be 7.8.4.
In 15.5.29, subsection 7.9.14 of XSL is referenced, but
it should be 7.19.4.
In 15.11.11, subsection 7.5.13 of XSL is referenced, but
it should be 7.15.13.
The IRI for the list of media types should be changed.
It is now http://www.iana.org/assignments/media-types/
The URI for the Thumbnail Managing Standard(TMS) should be
changed, but I do not know what is the latest URI.
An obsolete working draft of CSS3 text is
referenced in a normative manner.
An obsolete candidate recommendation of DOM3 event is
referenced in a normative manner.
In 2.1.1, the first value of text:display is defined as follows:
value
this value displays the value of the field. Some fields
do not support this value. In these cases, the
text:display attribute only takes the values
value or none, and value or formula, respectively.
First, what does "these cases" mean? The cases that fields do not
support this value? Second, what does "respectively" mean?
I guess that there are two cases. In the first case, the permissible
values are value or none; in the second case, they are value or formula.
But I have no ideas about what the two cases are.
I have the same question about the second value of text:display, namely
formula.
Unclear sentence in 2.1.1
Note that may contain all supported top-level
elements. None of the four subdocument root elements contain the
complete data, but four combined do.
What does "but four combined do" mean? Four subdocument root elements
collectively contain the complete data?
Section 9.2.6, 4th line on page 279
Current description:
Some implementations may only supports a subset of the SVG path
specification, for instance no mixtures of open and closed curves for one
shape, or no elliptical arc command.
Proposal:
"supports" should be "support" after the modal verb "may" as follows:
Some implementations may only support a subset of the SVG path
specification, for instance no mixtures of open and closed curves for one
shape, or no elliptical arc command.
Section 9.2.7, 8th line on page 280
Current description:
If this optional attribute are not set, the position and size attributes
are used to create circle.
Proposal:
The first "are" should be "is" as the subjective has a singular form:
If this optional attribute is not set, the position and size attributes
are used to create circle.
Section 9.2.12, 17th line on page 287
Current description:
The attributes draw:control attribute specifies the control within a form
(see section 11.5.2) that is linked to the control shape.
Proposal:
"attributes" should be removed from the current sentence as follows:
The draw:control attribute specifies the control within a form (see
section 11.5.2) that is linked to the control shape.
Section 9.2.18, 29th line on page 295
Current description:
The following defined attributes are common for all shapes that supports
styles and no text.
Proposal:
"supports" should be "support" as follows:
The following defined attributes are common for all shapes that support
styles and no text.
Section 9.2.18, 38th line on page 295
Current description:
The following defined attributes are common for all shapes that supports
styles and text.
Proposal:
"supports" should be "support" as follows:
The following defined attributes are common for all shapes that support
styles and text.
Section 9.2.19, 21st line on page 296
Current description:
The svg:x and svg:y attributes specifies the position of the glue point.
Proposal:
"specifies" should be "specify" as follows:
The svg:x and svg:y attributes specify the position of the glue point.
Section 9.2.19, 39th line on page 296
Current description:
The attribute draw:align specifies the alignment behavior of the glue
point if the drawing object is resized and the shape edge to which the
glue point's position relates.
Proposal:
The description in "if" clause should be paraphrased. For example, please
advise whether the following understanding is correct or not. It it is the
case, please correct the description accordingly:
The attribute draw:align specifies the alignment behavior of the glue
point if the drawing object is resized and aligned to the shape edge to
which the glue point's position relates.
Section 9.2.19, 12th line on page 297
Current description:
The value horizontal means the the connection line may escape to the left
or to the right, the value vertical means that the connection line may
escape up or down.
Proposal:
The first "the" in "the the" should be "that." The words "left" and
"right" are in a different font, while "up" and down" are not. Since
all of them are values of the draw:escape-direction attribute,
the same font should be used.
Section 9.3, 24th line on page 297
Current description:
A frame is a rectangular container where that contains enhanced content
like text boxes, images or objects.
Proposal:
"where" should be removed as follows:
A frame is a rectangular container that contains enhanced content like
text boxes, images or objects.
Section 9.3, 8th line on page 298
Current description:
Like the formatting properties of drawing shapes, frame formatting
properties are stored in styles belonging to the graphic family.
Proposal:
A different font is used for the word "graphic", but
it shouldn't.
Section 9.3, 21st line on page 299
Current description:
The value scale-min equals the value scale, except that the calculated
width or height is a minimum height rather than an absolute one.
Proposal:
Different fonts are used for the word "scale" and "scale-min".
Section 9.3, 25th line on page 299
Current description:
To support application that don't support relative with and heights,
applications that save the attributes style:rel-width or style:rel-height
should also provide the real width and heights in the svg:width and
svg:height/fo:min-height attributes.
Proposal:
"/" should be "or".
Section 9.3, 5th line on page 300
Current description:
This does not effect style and position information.
Proposal:
"effect" should be "affect" considering the semantics as follows:
This does not affect style and position information.
Section 9.3, 5th line on page 300
Current description:
This is, the frame that has the draw:copy-of attribute has its own style
and position information and does not use the one of the referenced frame.
Proposal:
"This" should be "That" as follows:
That is, the frame that has the draw:copy-of attribute has its own style
and position information and does not use the one of the referenced frame.
Section 9.3.1, 12th line on page 301
Current description:
The fo:min-height and fo:min-width attributes specify a minimum height or
width for a text box.
Proposal:
"or" should be "and" to synchronize with two attributes connected with
"and" as follows:
The fo:min-height and fo:min-width attributes specify a minimum height and
width for a text box.
Section 9.3.1, 14th line on page 301
Current description:
If they are existing, they overwrite the height or width of a text box
specified by the svg:height and svg:width attributes of the surrounding
draw:frame element.
Proposal:
"or" should be "and" as follows:
If they are existing, they overwrite the height and width of a text box
specified by the svg:height and svg:width attributes of the surrounding
draw:frame element.
Section 9.3.3, 5th line on page 304
Current description:
These objects only have a binary representation, An example for this kind
of objects OLE objects (see [OLE]).
Proposal:
The first sentence should end with a period "." and the second sentence
should have "is" as follows:
These objects only have a binary representation. An example for this kind
of objects is OLE objects (see [OLE]).
Section 9.3.3, 6th line on page 304
Current description:
The element represents objects that have a XML
representation.
Proposal:
"a" should be "an" as follows:
The element represents objects that have an XML
representation.
Section 9.3.3, 37th line on page 304
Current description:
The object is contained within this sub page exactly as it would as it is
a document of its own.
Proposal:
The current sentence should be paraphrased in a different way. Please
explain what "sub page" means and what the whole sentence means.
The whole sentence sounds to me as follows:
The object is contained in the document on the target page referenced by
the xlink:href attribute although the source page does not actually
contain the object. For end users, it exactly looks like that the source
page contains the object.
Is my understanding correct?
Section 8.11.7
Current description:
The element specified the id of a previously
tracked change that gets deleted by the current change.
Proposal:
"specified" should read "specifies" as follows:
The element specifies the id of a previously
@tracked change that gets deleted by the current change.
Section 8.11.8, 2nd line on page 259
Current description:
Depending on the deletion type, It is either the number of a row, a column
or a table.
Proposal: "It" should be "it" as follows:
Depending on the deletion type, it is either the number of a row, a column
or a table.
Section 8.11.14, 8th line on page 264
Current description:
The change track table cells additionally supports the attributes
table:formula, table:number-matrix-rows-spanned,
table:number-matrix-columns-spanned, office:value-type, office:value,
office:date-value, office:time-value and office:string-value as described
in section 8.1.3.
Proposal:
"cells" should be the singular form "cell" as follows:
The change track table cell additionally supports the attributes
table:formula, table:number-matrix-rows-spanned,
table:number-matrix-columns-spanned, office:value-type, office:value,
office:date-value, office:time-value and office:string-value as described
in section 8.1.3.
Section 9.1.4, 12th line on page 271
Current description:
The word "borders" is a keyword in the following sentence:
Defines properties such as the size and borders of the drawing page
Proposal:
The word "borders" shouldn't be akey word.
Section 9.1.5, Example: Drawing page on 273
Current descripton:
presentation:notes>
this is a note
Proposal:
presentaion:notes should be delineated by angle brackets as follows:
this is a note
Section 9.2.5, 5th line on page 278
Current description:
In general, if r is the radius of the polygon, and s is the sharpness, the
inner corners a located on a ellipse that's radius is r(100-s)/100.
Proposal: Please check if the following is the intended description:
In general, if r is the radius of the polygon, and s is the sharpness, the
inner corners are located on an ellipse whose radius is r(100-s)/100.
15.5.38 Snap To Layout
The title should be "Snap to Layout Grid".
The last para of 17.7.3
As an example, all XML streams have the media type "text/xml".
This is incorrect. First, there are lots of specialized media types
(*/*+xml) for XML. Second, even for generic XML, application/xml is
almost always more appropriate than text/xml .
The first para of "Key Derivation Name" in 17.7.6
The manifest:key-derivation-name attribute specifies the name of
the algorithm used to derive the name.
Perhaps, the second "name" should be replaced with "encryption key"?
The last para of 17.5
All other kinds of IRI references, namely the ones that start with a
protocol (like http:), an authority (i.e., //) or an absolute-path
(i.e., /) do not need any special processing. This especially means that
absolute-paths do not reference files inside the package, but within
the hierarchy the package is contained in, for instance the file system.
IRI references inside a package may leave the package, but once they
have left the package, they never can return into the package or
another one.
First, an absolute IRI reference begins with a scheme (rather than protocol),
and it does not start with an authority or an absolute-path.
Second, I do not undestand the second half of the second sentence. Is
something missing?
Mismatch of section titles and Appendix F o
The title of 15.16 is "Text and Text Alignment Properties", but 15.16
is quoted as "Text Alignment Properties" in the table in Appendix F.
Likewise, the title of 12.2 is "Number format", while 12.2 is quoted
as "Number Format for page numbers, etc." in the table in Appendix F.
Undefined elements in 15.36.10 "Sound"
The element is mentioned
in 15.36.10, but is never defined in the schema.
valueType in 16.1 "Data Types"
The schema implies that the permissible values of this type
is either "float", "time", "date", "percentage", "currency",
"boolean", or "string". However, the definition in 16.1 is:
valueType
A list of value types supported for certain generic values, such
as "string" or "date".
This text appears to allow "date string percentage currency boolean"
as a single permissible value of this type.
Is zero allowed as a length in Chap 10?
"A (positive or negative) physical length" (page 691) appears to
disallow zero.
Missing bullets in 15.36 "Presentation Page Attributes"
The itemized list immediately before 15.36.1 should enumerate all
properties. However, the following properties are missing, although
they do appear in subsubsections of 15.36.
Transition Type or Family
Transition Subtype
Transition Direction
Fade Color
Another conflict of attribute names in 15.36.8 "Page Duration"
presentation:page-duration is used in the body text, while
presentation:duration is used in the schema.
Element name conflict in 15.36 "Presentation Page Attributes"
The second sentence in this subsection says ,
but the schema appears to imply .
Can style:default-style contain the propoerties in 15.36
"Presentation Page Attributes"? The beginning of this subsection is:
The properties described in this section can be contained
within style elements whose family is drawing-page.
However, can style:default-style whose family is drawing-page
contain these properties? The schema appears to say so.
Attribute names in 15.31.4 "Tick Marks"
Two attributes (chart:axis-interval-major and
chart:axis-interval-minor) appear in the body text, while four
different attributes, (chart:tick-marks-major-inner,
chart:tick-marks-major-outer, chart:tick-marks-minor-inner, and
chart:tick-marks-minor-outer) appear in the schema.
Attribute names in 15.31.3 "Scaling"
chart:interval-minor-divisor is used in the body text, while
chart:interval-minor is used in the schema.
Attribute names in 15.31.3 "Scaling"
chart:axis-logarithmic is used in the body text, while
chart:logarithmic is used in the schema.
"vale" in 11.7.3 in ISO/IEC 26300 should read "value".
See section 6.7.1 for more information on vale and
value type attributes.
missing section number in 12.4
There is no section number at the last of the following paragraph in
12.4 Event Listener Tables.
"The element represents events that are
bound to an action that is specific to a presentation, for example, go
to the next page. Presentation events are described in section ."
In 14.7.9 Common Data Style Attributes, there is a mistake at the
last sentence of the description about Country attribute. The excerpt
of the sentences is as follows.
Country
The number:country attribute specifies the country of the
style. The value of the attribute is a country code in
conformance with [RFC3066]. The country code is used to
retrieve information about any display properties that are
country-dependent. The "language" attribute can be used with
all data style elements.
"language" must be replaced with "country".
Attribute names in 15.31.2 "Visibility"
chart:axis-visible is used in the body text, while
chart:visible is used in the schema.
Attribute names in 15.30.9 "Lines"
chart:splines is used in the body text, while
chart:lines is used in the schema.
Attribute names in 15.30.4 "Chart Symbol Size"
chart:symbol-length is used in the body text, while
chart:symbol-height is used in the schema.
Attribute names in 15.28.3 Margins of ODF 1.0
draw:margin-horizontal is used in the body text, while
draw:frame-margin-horizontal is used in the schema.
Likewise, draw:margin-vertical is used in the body text, while
draw:frame-margin-vertical is used in the schema.
The first para of 15.3.4 is:
If a page contains borders, the border line width attributes
style:border-line-width, style:border-line-width-top,
style:border-line-width-bottom, style:borderline-width-left and
style:border-line-width-right specify the properties of the
border lines of the headers and footers.
However, since 15.3 applies to headers and footers, should "If a page"
be replaced with "If a header or footer"?
The last sentence of the second para of 15.27.31 "Wrap Influence on Position"
is:
Without wrapping, the images overly the text and can simply be
placed at the given offset from the anchor.
Perhaps, "overly" should read "overlies"?
The first para in 15.27.22 says style:wrap-dynamic-threshold, while
the schema fragment in this subsection says style:wrap-dynamic-treshold.
("h" between "t" and "r" is missing.)
In 15.27.21 Wrapping, the third bullet in the first itemized list is:
right: Text may wrap around the left side of the drawing shape.
But "the left side" should read "the right side".
What does "this section" in 15.28.4 mean? Does it
refer to 15.28.4 or 15.28?
The third paragraph of 15.27
This corresponds to the object once-concurrently.
I believe that "object" should be replaced with "option".
I do not understand the second sentence of the second para of 15.27.31.
Without wrapping, the images overly the text and can simply be
placed at the given offset from the anchor.
What does "overly the text" mean?
"species" in 15.12 in ISO/IEC 26300 should read "specifies".
Is the following text in 15.10.1 Row Height correct?
The style:row-height property specifies a fixed row height,
while the style:min-row-height property specifies a fixed height.
These properties look exactly the same, since the latter obviously
apply to rows. However, doesn't the latter specify a *minimum* hight?
In 15.5.26 Border Line Width of ODF 1.0, we have:
The border line width attributes style:border-line-width,
style:border-line-wid th-top, style:border-line-width-bottom,
style:border-line-width-left and style:border-line-width-right
specify the properties of the border lines of the page.
Is the last word really "page"?
