TITLE: | Comments on ISO/IEC CD 13250, ver.1998-09-21 |
SOURCE: | SC34/Japan |
PROJECT: | JTC1.18.67 |
PROJECT EDITOR: | Michel Biezunski, Martin Bryan |
STATUS: | |
ACTION: | For information |
DATE: | 1998-10-26 |
DISTRIBUTION: | SC34 and Liaisons |
REFER TO: | |
REPLY TO: | Dr. James David Mason
(ISO/IEC JTC1/SC34 Chairman) Lockheed Martin Energy Systems Information Management Services 1060 Commerce Park, M.S. 6480 Oak Ridge, TN 37831-6480 U.S.A. Telephone: +1 423 574-6973 Facsimile: +1 423 574-0004 Network: masonjd@ornl.gov http://www.ornl.gov/sgml/sc34/ ftp://ftp.ornl.gov/pub/sgml/ |
The terminology "Topic Map" occurred in many clauses, e.g., 4.20, should be replaced with "Topic Navigation Map" or "TNM" to avoid a terminology confusion.
The clause of "3 Normative references" should includes:
The "data attribute" should be explained more clearly.
The wording "this Standard" occurred in many clauses, e.g., 6.1.2.7, 6.1.2.8, etc., should be replaced with "this International Standard".
The description
"In the above format specification, the registration
indicator, public text class and language fields are as specified for formal
public identifiers in ISO/IEC 8879:1986."
should be
"In
the above format specification, the registration indicator, public text class
and language fields are as specified for formal public identifiers in ISO/IEC
8879:1986 and ISO/IEC 9070:1991.".
ISO/IEC JTC1/SC34/n1957 should be ISO/IEC JTC1/WG4 N1957.
In the PDF version, NOTEs are clearly specified. In the HTML version, however, there is no NOTE indication. Even in the HTML version, NOTEs should be specified.