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From: jkr@letterbox.rl.ac.uk (John Reid)
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Here are my comments as a wg5 member. I have used Janice's pro-forma.

JOhn Reid. 


000 N Reid Item 4. is indeed redundant. It is also harmless. It can wait for
           the 95 revision.
           Item 5. The revised text is very harm to understand. I suggest:
           5. Page 245, section 14.1.2.5, in the second sentence [245:3]
            change 'It' to 'Outside the type definition, it'.

087 N Reid Placing named constants in SAVE statements is surely harmless.
           Why not leave it? No reason is given for this change to the standard.

090 Y Reid For the edits, I prefer the usual form:
             after 'text' add 'new text'
           rather than the use of a dotted line.

131 Y Reid I see no need for item 6. The text of 143/46-48 is already 
           clear and unambiguous.

143 N Reid I think that it would be much better to repair the text that
           has been found to be faulty. All that is needed is
           EDIT: In 11.3.2, paragraph beginning 'The local name', first line
           [158:33]: delete 'specification'.

153 Y Reid For edit 5, the line no. should be 6.

154 N Reid I think that it is a mistake to allow zero-sized substrings in 
           equivalence. We really need to know which is the first character
           of the string and there is none. I would like simply to disallow
           them. 

155 N Reid The first three edits are appropriate for the 95 revision, 
           but are not necessary in the corrigendum. The two routes 
           through the syntax give the same result.

157 Y Reid Typo: couterintuitive

165 N Reid I agree with Bill Leonard. In view of 152:8-10, ne edit is needed.
            
