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  Ballot on forwarding N1580 (J3/03-259r3) as the PDTR on Enhanced Module
  Facilities

               Deadline: 9 a.m. UK time on December 17th.


Yes, with the following comments:


Page ii, second line of third paragraph, remove "(ISO/IEC 1539-1:2004)".
This passage is referring to the next standard after that one.

Page 2, lines 20-21: Change the font of SUBMODULE and END SUBMODULE to
ordinary font.  The standard does not use "code font" except for actual
code examples.

Page 3, line 7: remove "or procedure body".  If the interface body is
accessible the procedure body is necessarily accessible, so there's no
need to say so.

Page 8, line 7: replace "interface" by "<<module procedure interface>>".

Page 8, line 12: remove the paragraph.

Page 9, after line 29:

[403:35] In the fourth line of the second paragraph of 15.4.1 on page 403,
replace ``not a dummy procedure'' by ``neither a dummy procedure nor a
procedure defined in a submodule that does not have an interface declared in
the ancestor module''.

[403:36] At the end of the last line of the second paragraph of 15.4.1 on
page 403, add a sentence ``Otherwise the procedure has no binding label.''


Signed Van Snyder

