From owner-sc22wg5@dkuug.dk Tue Sep 9 14:51:58 2003 Received: (from majordom@localhost) by dkuug.dk (8.12.8p1/8.9.2) id h89CpwYo000131 for sc22wg5-domo; Tue, 9 Sep 2003 14:51:58 +0200 (CEST) (envelope-from owner-sc22wg5@dkuug.dk) X-Authentication-Warning: ptah.dkuug.dk: majordom set sender to owner-sc22wg5@dkuug.dk using -f Received: from inf.rl.ac.uk (nfs7.inf.rl.ac.uk [130.246.72.7]) by dkuug.dk (8.12.8p1/8.9.2) with ESMTP id h89CplCp000117 for ; Tue, 9 Sep 2003 14:51:49 +0200 (CEST) (envelope-from j.k.reid@rl.ac.uk) Received: from numerical.cc.rl.ac.uk (numerical [130.246.8.23]) by inf.rl.ac.uk (8.11.6+Sun/8.8.8) with ESMTP id h89Cpuo13504 for ; Tue, 9 Sep 2003 13:51:56 +0100 (BST) Received: from rl.ac.uk (jkr.cse.rl.ac.uk [130.246.9.202]) by numerical.cc.rl.ac.uk (8.8.8+Sun/8.8.8) with ESMTP id OAA10934 for ; Tue, 9 Sep 2003 14:00:54 +0100 (BST) Message-ID: <3F5DCFC0.1080102@rl.ac.uk> Date: Tue, 09 Sep 2003 14:04:00 +0100 From: John Reid Reply-To: j.k.reid@rl.ac.uk Organization: Rutherford Appleton Laboratory User-Agent: Mozilla/5.0 (X11; U; Linux i686; en-US; rv:1.0.1) Gecko/20020823 Netscape/7.0 X-Accept-Language: en-us, en MIME-Version: 1.0 To: WG5 Subject: Possible comments Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii; format=flowed Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Sender: owner-sc22wg5@dkuug.dk Precedence: bulk Here are some draft edits to go with my personal vote. Any comments? John. [177:18] Change 'a the' to 'a'. [203:NOTE 9.49] In CLASS statement, delete space ahead of comma. [204:NOTE 9.50] In CLASS statement, delete space ahead of comma. [255:35] Change 'entity' to 'identifier'. [430:20] Change 'An ... program.' to 'A program unit, common block, external procedure, procedure binding label, or variable that has the BIND attribute.' [The glossary entry was not updated when 16.1 was revised.] [448:1,7,13]. Change 'CLASS' to 'TYPE'. [This is the first of the fixes suggested by Malcolm and was favoured by Aleksandar. I think it is adequate since there is no discussion of overriding in the text of this subsection.] [564:1-3]. Merge the two index entries for .