From owner-sc22wg5@dkuug.dk Sat May 3 00:39:57 2003 Received: (from majordom@localhost) by dkuug.dk (8.12.8p1/8.9.2) id h42MdvCH086016 for sc22wg5-domo; Sat, 3 May 2003 00:39:57 +0200 (CEST) (envelope-from owner-sc22wg5@dkuug.dk) X-Authentication-Warning: ptah.dkuug.dk: majordom set sender to owner-sc22wg5@dkuug.dk using -f Received: from mailhub.dfrc.nasa.gov (mailhub.dfrc.nasa.gov [130.134.81.12]) by dkuug.dk (8.12.8p1/8.9.2) with ESMTP id h42MdqEc086010 for ; Sat, 3 May 2003 00:39:53 +0200 (CEST) (envelope-from maine@altair.dfrc.nasa.gov) Received: from mail.dfrc.nasa.gov by mailhub.dfrc.nasa.gov with ESMTP for sc22wg5@dkuug.dk; Fri, 2 May 2003 15:38:29 -0700 Received: from altair.dfrc.nasa.gov ([130.134.20.211]) by mail.dfrc.nasa.gov (Post.Office MTA v3.5.3 release 223 ID# 0-71686U2500L200S0V35) with ESMTP id gov for ; Fri, 2 May 2003 15:40:40 -0700 Received: from altair.dfrc.nasa.gov (localhost.localdomain [127.0.0.1]) by altair.dfrc.nasa.gov (8.12.8/8.12.5) with ESMTP id h42MehEc009259 for ; Fri, 2 May 2003 15:40:43 -0700 Received: (from maine@localhost) by altair.dfrc.nasa.gov (8.12.8/8.12.8/Submit) id h42MehRb009255; Fri, 2 May 2003 15:40:43 -0700 From: Richard Maine MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Message-Id: <16050.62443.446503.305015@altair.dfrc.nasa.gov> Date: Fri, 2 May 2003 15:40:43 -0700 To: sc22wg5@dkuug.dk Subject: Typos and editorial trivia in 03-007 X-Mailer: VM 7.07 under 21.4 (patch 8) "Honest Recruiter" XEmacs Lucid Sender: owner-sc22wg5@dkuug.dk Precedence: bulk Here's an initial draft of a paper for Dresden. I expect to add more to this paper, so it probably shouldn't get a number yet. But thought I might circulate the draft just so that I don't get 20 different people pointing out the same problems. -- Richard Maine | Good judgment comes from experience; Richard.Maine@nasa.gov | experience comes from bad judgment. | -- Mark Twain ------------------------------------------------- Date: 2 May 03 To: WG5 From: Richard Maine Subject: Typos and editorial trivia in 03-007 This paper has edits to correct some typos and editorial trivia in 03-007. All page and line references are to 03-007. Aleksander Donev pointed out the following typos [59:Note 4.51] Reformat the example as TYPE, ABSTRACT :: FILE_HANDLE CONTAINS PROCEDURE(OPEN_FILE), DEFERRED, PASS(HANDLE) :: OPEN ... END TYPE [445:36] Indent this line like the REAL declarations earlier. Dick Hendrickson pointed out the following [44:19] "accessibile" -> "accessible" [47:Note 4.24 2nd line] "to to" -> "to" [47:16] "sitype-param-decl" -> "" [55:10] "" -> "" [164:23] "paraqmeter" -> "parameter" [299:29] "allocatiom" -> "allocation" [340:Note 13.15 2nd line] "transfering" -> "transferring" [449:12] The wrong style of dash was typeset, but instead of just changing the dash, a better edit is "-so" -> ";". Section 10 has 3 cases of "nondelimited" and 1 of "undelimited". I agree with Dick that "undelimited" sounds better, so I propose changing "[a] nondelimited" to "[an] undelimited" at [240:21], [241:6], [243:3], and [248:4]. Alternatively, we could change "undelimited" to "nondelimited" at [246:Note 10.35 3rd line]. Don't do both edits. (If this paper passes without directions otherwise, do the 4 changes instead of the alternative one.) James Giles pointed out the following [308:8] "=\pi" -> "-\pi" (where \pi means the math symbol). And on my own initiative... The word "since" is best reserved for contexts where it refers to time. Some of the uses in the draft are appropriate, but others are not. In some cases, it is potentially confusing because time is involved in the sentence, but that isn't what the "since" is referring to. "since" -> "because" (retaining capitalization) at [8:34], [12:Note 2.2], [45:Note 4.21 line 6] [49:Note 4.27], [277:Note 12.31], [347:21], [368:20], [414:Note 16.10 line 19], [440:38], [465:25] "since" -> "in that" at [441:7] (Both "since" and "because" seem wrong here).