From owner-sc22wg5 Thu Nov 29 11:23:25 2001 Received: from edogawa-u.ac.jp (mail.edogawa-u.ac.jp [210.235.130.12]) by dkuug.dk (8.9.2/8.9.2) with SMTP id LAA67566 for ; Thu, 29 Nov 2001 11:23:21 +0100 (CET) (envelope-from takata@edogawa-u.ac.jp) Message-Id: <200111291023.LAA67566@dkuug.dk> Received: (qmail 29500 invoked from network); 29 Nov 2001 19:23:15 +0900 Received: from abk142109.dhcp.edogawa-u.ac.jp (HELO takata-n6) (210.235.142.109) by mail.edogawa-u.ac.jp with SMTP; 29 Nov 2001 19:23:15 +0900 X-Sender: takata@edogawa-u.ac.jp (Unverified) X-Mailer: QUALCOMM Windows Eudora Pro Version 3.0.5-J (32) Date: Thu, 29 Nov 2001 19:23:14 +0900 To: SC22WG5@dkuug.dk From: TAKATA Masayuki Subject: Re: (SC22WG5.2274) Results of the ballot on Corrigendum 2 In-Reply-To: <200111261743.SAA53934@dkuug.dk> Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset="us-ascii" Dear John, I am sorry I couldn't check N1469 in time. Instead, I checked N1472 and found a couple of significant mistakes as well as several editorial or stylistic improvements. Pages below refer to the standard, while lines or text refer to the Draft Corrigendum itself. Regards, Makki -------- Suggested changes to N1472 ------------- Page 3, in the first line of the edit: Change 'an' to 'two', or something better. Pages 45 and 46, at the end of the first edit: Add a full stop. Page 62, in the first edit: Delete '=>', which is not in N1467. Page 66, at the end of the second edit: Add a full stop. Page 113, in the last line: Make '' into subscripted form. Page 136, in the third line: Change ', or' to 'or'. Page 194, similar changes as in Page 136, twice. Page 209, in the first line: Change 'Change ""' to 'change "."'. Page 258, in the first edit: Change 'change' to 'delete', and delete 'to "The"'. Page 322, the location: Change '<>' to '<>'. -- Takata, Masayuki (Mr.) Associate Professor, Edogawa University Komaki 474, Nagareyama, Chiba 270-0198 Japan Tel: +81-471-52-0661 ext.546 Fax: +81-471-54-2490