From owner-sc22wg5+sc22wg5-dom8=www.open-std.org@open-std.org Fri Feb 5 08:51:22 2016 Return-Path: X-Original-To: sc22wg5-dom8 Delivered-To: sc22wg5-dom8@www.open-std.org Received: by www.open-std.org (Postfix, from userid 521) id 19E2D358762; Fri, 5 Feb 2016 08:51:22 +0100 (CET) Delivered-To: sc22wg5@open-std.org Received: from nag-j.co.jp (bvdeuz19.secure.ne.jp [180.222.80.19]) by www.open-std.org (Postfix) with SMTP id 92DEC35690C for ; Fri, 5 Feb 2016 08:51:06 +0100 (CET) Received: (qmail 65099 invoked from network); 5 Feb 2016 16:50:59 +0900 Received: from unknown (HELO Maru10) (218.42.159.105) by 0 with SMTP; 5 Feb 2016 16:50:59 +0900 Message-ID: From: "Cohen Malcolm" To: "WG5" Subject: Some more comments on draft Corrigendum 4 Date: Fri, 5 Feb 2016 16:52:03 +0900 MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; format=flowed; charset="iso-2022-jp"; reply-type=original Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit X-Priority: 3 X-MSMail-Priority: Normal Importance: Normal X-Mailer: Microsoft Windows Live Mail 16.4.3528.331 X-MimeOLE: Produced By Microsoft MimeOLE V16.4.3528.331 Sender: owner-sc22wg5@open-std.org Precedence: bulk (15) In the edit for F08/0104 at [152:7-8], in the editing instructions, delete the word "bullet" (it is not a bullet item). (16) In the edit for F08/0140 at [153:25-28], the final bullet does not need any condition, it could just simply be "each deferred length parameter of the variable...", i.e. the edit could be described as After "coindexed object," delete "the variable", before each "shall not" insert "the variable", before "shall have" insert "of the variable". ...more later (but not today). Cheers, -- ........................Malcolm Cohen, Nihon NAG, Tokyo.