From owner-sc22wg5+sc22wg5-dom8=www.open-std.org@open-std.org Mon Jan 5 20:33:41 2015 Return-Path: X-Original-To: sc22wg5-dom8 Delivered-To: sc22wg5-dom8@www.open-std.org Received: by www.open-std.org (Postfix, from userid 521) id 09CAC356E0D; Mon, 5 Jan 2015 20:33:40 +0100 (CET) Delivered-To: sc22wg5@open-std.org Received: from mail.jpl.nasa.gov (smtp.jpl.nasa.gov [128.149.139.105]) by www.open-std.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 24E14356DCB for ; Mon, 5 Jan 2015 20:33:36 +0100 (CET) Received: from [137.79.7.57] (math.jpl.nasa.gov [137.79.7.57]) by smtp.jpl.nasa.gov (Sentrion-MTA-4.3.1/Sentrion-MTA-4.3.1) with ESMTP id t05JXWs0014960 (using TLSv1/SSLv3 with cipher DHE-RSA-AES128-SHA (128 bits) verified NO) for ; Mon, 5 Jan 2015 11:33:33 -0800 Subject: Re: (j3.2006) (SC22WG5.5405) TS revision and straw vote From: Van Snyder Reply-To: Van.Snyder@jpl.nasa.gov To: sc22wg5@open-std.org In-Reply-To: <20150101184105.4D29E9EB08D@www.open-std.org> References: <20150101184105.4D29E9EB08D@www.open-std.org> Content-Type: text/plain; charset="ISO-8859-1" Organization: Yes Date: Mon, 05 Jan 2015 11:33:32 -0800 Message-ID: <1420486412.19479.327.camel@math.jpl.nasa.gov> Mime-Version: 1.0 X-Mailer: Evolution 2.32.3 (2.32.3-34.el6) Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit X-Source-Sender: Van.Snyder@jpl.nasa.gov X-AUTH: Authorized Sender: owner-sc22wg5@open-std.org Precedence: bulk A few trivial editorial comments, all involving the definite article: [9:5] Replace "all the" with "all". A definite article is not correct here. [10:21,40] Replace "all the" with "all" twice. A definite article is not correct here. [11:11] Delete "the" before "execution". A definite article is not correct here, since the FORM TEAM statement might have been executed more than once. [11:14+8 in lines 3-4 of Note 5.3] Replace "all the" with "all". A definite article is not correct here. [12:26] Replace "all the" with "all". A definite article is not correct here. [13:4] Replace "all the" with "all". A definite article is not correct here. [14:3,22] Replace "all the" with "all" twice. A definite article is not correct here. [14:29] delete "the" before "normal completion". A definite article is not correct here, since the CHANGE TEAM construct might be executed more than once. [18:24+2 in line 1 of Note 6.3] Replace "all the" with "all". A definite article is not correct here. [20:28+5 in line 1 of Note 7.3] Replace "all the" with "all". A definite article is not correct here. [25:3,11,26,34] Replace "all the" with "all" four times. A definite article is not correct here. [26:8] Replace "all the" with "all" twice. A definite article is not correct here. [26:42] Replace "all the" with "all". A definite article is not correct here. [27:4] Replace "all the" with "all". A definite article is not correct here. [33:17] Replace "all the" with "all". A definite article is not correct here. [38:32] Replace "all the" with "all". A definite article is not correct here. [49:17,36] Replace "all the" with "all" twice. A definite article is not correct here. [50:48] Replace "all the" with "all". A definite article is not correct here. [52:21] Replace "all the" with "all". A definite article is not correct here. On Thu, 2015-01-01 at 18:40 +0000, John Reid wrote: > WG5, > > I attach the following documents > > N2039 Response to the WG5 straw ballot on N2033 (Long and Reid) > This contains responses to the straw ballot comments, taking account of > emails on the coarray discussion list. > > N2040 Draft TS 18508 Additional Parallel Features in Fortran (Long) > - supersedes N2033 > This is a new draft TS, incorporating the edits in N2039 and one > additional minor edit from the editor. > > N2041 Editor's report for WG5/N2040 (Long) > This contains the editor's report on all the changes from N2033. > > N2044 WG5 straw ballot on N2040 (Reid) > This is a new straw ballot with deadline 17 January. > > Note that the number of changes this time is far less than last time. > They address all the straw vote comments except those of Nick Maclaren. > > Happy New Year! > > John. > _______________________________________________ > J3 mailing list > J3@mailman.j3-fortran.org > http://mailman.j3-fortran.org/mailman/listinfo/j3