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Subject: Re: (j3.2006) (SC22WG5.5028) WG5 vote on draft TS on further coarray
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Hi,

On Jul 10, 2013, at 03:07 , John Reid <John.Reid@stfc.ac.uk> wrote:

> WG5,

I vote YES with Comments

Comments attached 
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Comments on 13-293

My vote is YES with Comments,
comments follow

[9:3
Do teams synchronize with other teams,
or do images within a team synchronize?
It might be a stretched reading, but the sentence could be clarified.

[9:9]
Change "...from values stored in its team variable"
to "...from values obtained via its team variable"
Don't constrain the implementation.  What if the application-visible
team variable is a handle?

[11:27-12:1-4]
Are the STAT_* errors (>0) or information (<0)?
"Failed" sounds like an error but its intended usage
sounds like information to be detected, a response made,
and execution continued.

[13:9]
Change "includes" to "references"
Don't constrain the implementation.

[13:22+]
Clarify that the order of receipt of event postings
is processor dependent.
Add a new paragraph
"The order of arrival of the effects of event post statements
is processor dependent."

[16:3-5]
Change the paragraph to give an explanatory message
when an informative value is passed to the stat= specifier.

Question about atomic_and, atomic_or, atomic_xor:
Why not allow type logical?  And and or are well defined,
xor is neqv, and there is an atomic logical kind.

[21:10-12]
Replace status= being zero or nonzero to distinguish
ok =0, errors >0, and information <0 values.

Somewhere in the discussion, clarify that the order of arrival
of the effects of event posts and event waits is processor dependent.

Question:
Are there directions for the Editor to place the TS Annex A words
into the 007 annex C?  The Editor can probably wrangle something,
but it's better to give some hints.

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Dan Nagle





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