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Subject: Re: (SC22WG5.4924) WG5 ballot on first draft TS 18508, Additional Parallel Features in Fortran
From: David Muxworthy <d.muxworthy@bcs.org.uk>
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> Please answer the following question "Is N1967 ready for forwarding to 
> SC22 as the DTS?" in one of these ways. 
>  
> 3) No, for the following reasons.

Technical:
Given the issues already raised by others, the document is clearly
not yet ready for forwarding.

Editorial:
Subclause 2
At [3:5+] add:
ISO/IEC 1539-1:2010/Cor 1:2012
ISO/IEC 1539-1:2010/Cor 2:2013

Subclause 3
The 'ISO_FORTRAN_ENV' module referenced at 3.2 and 3.3 is not the
module from Fortran 2008.  At [5:3] add sentence "The intrinsic
module ISO_FORTRAN_ENV is extended by this document."

At 3.3 'team variable' should either follow 3.4 'team' or be
subsumed under 'team'.

Subclause 4
[7:8] Replace "This" by "Except as identified in 4.1 above, this".

Subclause 8.3
The items should be in numerical order.


David



