From owner-sc22wg5@open-std.org Mon Apr 12 02:46:47 2010 Return-Path: X-Original-To: sc22wg5-dom8 Delivered-To: sc22wg5-dom8@www2.open-std.org Received: by www2.open-std.org (Postfix, from userid 521) id AFEFBC3BA0B; Mon, 12 Apr 2010 02:46:47 +0200 (CET DST) X-Original-To: sc22wg5@open-std.org Delivered-To: sc22wg5@open-std.org Received: from ns.nag-j.co.jp (218-42-159-107.cust.bit-drive.ne.jp [218.42.159.107]) by www2.open-std.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id C13D6C178E3 for ; Mon, 12 Apr 2010 02:46:46 +0200 (CET DST) Received: from 218-42-159-108.cust.bit-drive.ne.jp ([218.42.159.108] helo=Marucomputer) by ns.nag-j.co.jp with smtp (Exim 4.50) id 1O17n8-0001oT-SK for sc22wg5@open-std.org; Mon, 12 Apr 2010 09:46:18 +0900 Message-ID: <8264F9BA6FCB4FE098A45E631047A212@Marucomputer> From: "Malcolm Cohen" To: References: <4B9E3D7F.3000402@stfc.ac.uk> <20100409090050.2BBFBC3BA05@www2.open-std.org> In-Reply-To: <20100409090050.2BBFBC3BA05@www2.open-std.org> Subject: Comments on suggested changes for the DIS Date: Mon, 12 Apr 2010 09:46:45 +0900 Organization: ??NAG MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; format=flowed; charset="iso-8859-1"; reply-type=original Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit X-Priority: 3 X-MSMail-Priority: Normal Importance: Normal X-Mailer: Microsoft Windows Live Mail 14.0.8089.726 X-MimeOLE: Produced By Microsoft MimeOLE V14.0.8089.726 Sender: owner-sc22wg5@open-std.org Precedence: bulk I agree with: Long 1 Muxworthy 1 Muxworthy 2 Snyder 1 Snyder 2 re Muxworthy 3, I have no strong opinion but would prefer not to change the ordering of subclauses. re Muxworthy 4, also the diagram should not have a paragraph number of its own. Also, everything except "Plasma" is a submodule, so they should all be called submodules. I agree that using ASCII art here looks amateurish; the diagram is only an ordinary tree, so just turning on its side and using indentation should be sufficient (and less work), viz Plasma module Flow submodule Subsonic submodule Supersonic submodule Hypersonic submodule Thermal submodule Electromagnetics submodule I further note that most of the examples in Annex C are typeset as normal text (with paragraph numbers!) instead of as examples. This should be fixed sometime, but now is probably not the right time. Cheers, -- ................................Malcolm Cohen, Nihon NAG, Tokyo.