-------------------------------------------------------------------- ISO/IEC JTC1 SC22 WG16 N184 ITTF Comments on DIS 13816 ------------------------------------------------------------------------- Source: WG16 project editor Action: use at WG16 15th meeting, under agenda item 8 ------------------------------------------------------------------------- ISO/CS comments 96-09-30 ============================================================================== COMMENTS ON BACK SIDE OF COVER (which we had left blank) 1. Should have running header [ISO/IEC 13816:1996(E)] 2. Contents starts here. 3. Leave room for copyright notice at bottom of page. 4. Number this page "ii" [bottom left corner, not bottom center] ============================================================================== COMMENTS ON PAGE 1 OF CONTENTS 1. Will start on back of cover (left-hand page) 2. Break list of contents before "6 Control Structure", leaving rest of page blank. Push over to next page to leave room for copyright notice (inserted by ISO/CS). 3. Number this page "ii" [bottom corner]. ============================================================================== COMMENTS ON PAGE 2 OF CONTENTS 1. Running header for this page is flipped. Right edge of top header on these (right-hand) pages should say "(c) ISO/IEC" [not bold] and left edge should say "ISO/IEC 13816:1996(E)" [bold]. On left-hand pages, it's the same but flipped; that is, the copyright goes toward the center of the open document and the document name to the outside. 2. Number this page "iii" [bottom corner]. ============================================================================== COMMENTS ON PAGE 3 OF CONTENTS 1. Repeat of header comment. 2. Repeat of footer comment ("iv"). ============================================================================== COMMENTS ON PAGE 4 OF CONTENTS (blank) 1. Foreword will be created by ISO/CS for p. "v" 2. Introduction to follow on page "vi". ============================================================================== COMMENTS ON PAGE 1 1. Special first page running head: INTERNATIONAL STANDARD (c) ISO/IEC ISO/IEC 13816:1996(E) ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~ bold not bold 2. Insert title at top of page [below header, before text begins] 3. Move introduction to a separate p. "vi" 4. Rename "1.1 Scope of the Standard" to "1.1 Scope" 5. In 1.1 items 1 and 2, change "This document" to "This International Standard" in two places. 6. Put page number at bottom, not top, in the outside corner. ============================================================================== COMMENTS ON PAGE 2 1. Header for all pages: ISO/IEC 13816:1996(E) (c) ISO/IEC ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~ bold not bold 2. In 1.2, change "this draft International Standard" to "this International Standard". 3. In 1.2, change "standards listed below" to "standards indicated below". 4. In 1.2, bullet 1, change "programming languages" to "programming language standards". 5. In 1.3 (Notation and Conventions), change "this document" to "this International Standard" and repeat change throughout document. 6. Put page number at bottom, not top, in the outside corner. ============================================================================== COMMENTS ON PAGE 3 1. Reminder about changed header. 2. Reminder about "this document" => "this International Standard" in middle of page. 3. Reminder about page number at bottom corner. ============================================================================== COMMENTS ON PAGE 4 1. Reminder about changed header. 2. Reminder about "this document" => "this International Standard" in middle of page. 3. Reminder about page number at bottom corner. ============================================================================== COMMENTS ON PAGE 7 1. Reminder about changed header. 2. Rename "1.7 Basic Terminology" to "1.7 Definitions". 3. Change first sentence from: Throughout this document, the following terminolgoy will be used. to: For the purposes of this International Standard, the following definitions apply. 4. Renumber items in 1.7 from "1.", "2.", etc. to "1.7.1", "1.7.2", ... 5. Reminder about page number at bottom corner. ============================================================================== COMMENTS ON PAGE 8 1. In item 21 (now 1.7.21), show notes in smaller type size (not italics) for this and all notes throughout document. -------------------------------------------------------------------------